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so i think i finished the current game (i also have the same picture as the person below, and the CGI gallery is full, but i'm missing a ton of images, are those patreon only or did i just miss them for some reason? lol

If you're referring to the gallery images, then the ones in this update are exclusive to Patreon. In the next update, they will be available in the free version.

oigan me pueden ayudar porque ya no me deja continuar si alguien tiene la respuesta me la pueden dar porfa

This update ends here. Please wait for the next update.

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Pensé que estaba asta el capítulo 11 parece que me equivoque perdon 😅

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i just met Aita in the story and i'm curious if he/she gets any scenes, i wouldn't even mind if it was something with mc lol

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You will have a surprise in the next episode, hehe.

Will any of your games have impreg?

This game will have that in the future.

Hello abbyscat, can you translate your game into Brazilian Portuguese please, if so please answer me

O jogo já está em Portugues do Brasil, basta ir nas configurações do jogo e mudar a linguagem para o Português.

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OK thanks, and keep making your amazing games, I hope you only succeed

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that's quite the different cast of girls in the main picture, there's something for everyone lol

is there any anal scenes? forced sex? lesbian? ntr and stuff like that? would be nice to have a list of all the fetishes and stuff in the page lol

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In the next update, I'll put the list of tags on the main page. No, I don't plan to add NTR. Lesbian content, maybe, and forced sex, maybe as well. As for anal sex, that's definitely going to be included.

This really needs some rewriting. The pacing is terrible, characters that are actually interesting are abandoned constantly in favor of new faces without a chance to really develop, let alone letting anything romantic develop. It feels like only the primary plot is given consideration, and the rest is just a vehicle to drive the plot forward... meaning it becomes difficult to invest in any of these empty characters.

Either you didn't play the whole game or you didn't read anything I wrote on the initial page. I mentioned there that I added so many girls to have more future content and that from episode 11 onward, I would focus only on the girls already in the game to deepen the story. It seems like you didn't read anything and just came to criticize for the sake of criticizing, which makes things difficult, man.

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No, I get that. You're right though, my criticism is mean spirited here, and I do apologize for that. It was uncalled for. That said, I hope that you slow the stories roll, and focus far less on such a broad cast, and instead on deepening the relationships already presented.

I intend to do that from episode 11 onward.

Apologies again for my inadequate explanation. I'm trying to suggest that, essentially, you're going to have to write backwards. Flesh things out and adjust pacing. Eventually, you're probably going to come to this conclusion on your own.
I am being an armchair commander and an ass though, and even my apologies are sounding superficial and assinine. Sorry for being an insufferable know it all. I really do respect you a great deal, for being able to carry through a complex project like this to such a point, and for really putting yourself out there. I'm sorry if I only served to embitter you with poorly aimed criticisms, and hope you'll ignore naysayers like myself and keep doing your good work.

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I really liked your game, there are things to improve but out there I loved it

Thanks for the feedback <3

Cara, esse jogo é bom, divertido e tem bastante potencial, até agora estou adorando, embora ache que tem algumas oportunidades perdidas, como quando o mc vai comprar uma moto, a cena corta para o momento onde a papelada é assinada, quando aquele era um momento perfeito pra loirinha levar ele pra um escritório ou uma salinha fechada e ter uma cena mais... Adulta naquele momento, mas no geral é um jogo bom.

haha isso é verdade, ate eu pensei nisso mais ja era tarde para voltar o jogo todo e consertar isso.

Talvez não, talvez você possa tirar tempo, ao invés de fazer um capítulo novo, refazer capítulos antigos, além disso, não é como se ao refazer capítulos antigos não dê para adicionar conteúdo novo, é só aproveitar pequenas chances como a que eu falei.


Outra coisa que senti foi que tudo é muito fácil e rápido, como quando pagamos a dívida do Aika, isso acontece em minutos, sendo que não precisava, talvez alguns días após a conversa no quarto eles pudessem ir até o dono da casa juntos e assinar a papelada.

do you plan on making Aika have Lewd scenes?  I would absolutely love that if so

Absolutely.

yay :3. When do you plan on releasing the next update? 

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I started creating Episode 12 today, so I'm not sure when it will be released.

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I didn't like this VN

tbh there are far better stories out there and the "rewinding, back in time" is just so cliche at this point. The explanation is so vague and even stupid. The characters' body composition vary from one scene to another and man come on. I just couldn't play this.

I'm sorry if I'm a bit too harsh but things gotta be said.

I really liked the menu though good work on that.


3/10

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People like you are the low lives of the world. You play an indie game completely for free and still feel entitled to share your crappy opinion online meanwhile you're probably 60 dollars for a AAA game that's designed as a cash grab and filled with micro transactions to the brim.

If I have to guess you're under 18 because only children do such a messed up thing. Grown-up simply ignore games they didn't like if they didn't spend any money on them

I thought the same thing. The style of the girls doesn't change from one scene to another. The only part that changed was in Episode 11, and I left a notice about it. But from Episode 1 to 10, everything remained the same. The "cliché" of "going back in time" was just an excuse I used to try to create a cool story. I just didn't understand all this criticism.

Isn't this plot similar to the manhwua Return of legend.  ride on man👍

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I only used a few things from the beginning of the manhwa as inspiration; after that, I followed my own path.

Eu gostei do jogo, história legal e personagens interessantes, o que me incomodou um pouco foi tanto na parte dos textos, muitas partes do texto em inglês(eu joguei o jogo em inglês) estão não muito fluídas ou com um erro gramatical aqui e acolá(nada que atrapalhasse meu entendimento até onde lembro), e até mesmo aonde está em português(nas partes não traduzidas) tem erros que só brasileiro comete, tipo "mais" no lugar de "mas" ou essas coisas.


Eu sei que pode não ser o caso, mas aquele último personagem, na criação dele você se inspirou em alguém conhecido como Raluca?...


8/10

Eu curti o jogo mas tem alguns pontos na história que achei meio estranho e os textos também contribuíram para esses 2 pontos a menos.

E par finalizar, boa decisão em não aumentar mais a quantidade de personagens, além do fato de que te daria mais trabalho, também tem a consequência de uma história com muitos personagens, pois quanto mais personagens mais desenvolvimento na história o que faria com que ela fosse demasiadamente longa, afetando tanto pra quem lê quanto pra quem escreve. Não só isso, mas quanto mais personagens em um jogo mais difícil fica para lembrar deles (principalmente quando falamos de uma História Interativa) e se em algum momento aparecer o personagem X ou Y os jogadores ficariam "ué quem é esse cara??".

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sim, eu não falo ingles fluentemente então tive que usar o deepl como tradutor, então ele sempre comete alguns erros e não a garota não é inpirada na raluca kkkkkkkkk, e sim, eu não vou adicionar novas garotas por agora, vou focar nas que ja tem.

Ok first, thanks for the Update and Upgrade. It's Kinda Short but it's very Worth it when you see the Quality. The Previous Character sprites are already good but it's nice of you to give them Assets. Looking forward to the next Update. Also, Looking forward for more FMCs.

Thank you for liking the game. I hope you continue following the upcoming updates.

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is there futa?

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No, lol.

Show post...

Spanish?

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It has a Spanish translation.

Show post...

Gracias :)

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I hope you get better from the flu,it will take me a few days to play the new episode because the damn flu doesn't even let me get out of bed, (this game is really one of my favorites, soon I think I will start supporting this game on patreon) I hope you get better. ❤️

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I know how it is; I was like that until recently. I'd get up, come to the PC, work on the game a bit, but my body couldn't take it, and I'd go back to bed. I hope you get better.

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It seems that some people are having issues with the APK version of the game. I recommend using JoiPlay to play the PC version on your phone; it's better and more stable. I've tried to fix the error in the text message parts of the game, where the MC's dialogues don't appear, but this only happens in the APK version. It's definitely a problem with Ren'Py compiling the game for APK.

First, Nice Job on the intro having a GT 720 while making this is ghadly XD. But some images aren't translated (Very minor) like the Eviction notice the paper isn't translated but you Subtitled it which is nice and I Like it. But dying to a blast radius is kinda Pathetic but understandable also Very Great Job for introducing the MC and the characters. Also, few may not notice it but thanks for implementing a delete save not many use it nowadays. And YES FINALLY, A real Character development not just time skip and stuff an Actual Character development. I also like what you going with this A modern world with a touch of fantasy and Future is always a Chef's kiss if the author knows the Flow(if you know what I mean hehe).


Totally, 9.8/10

(.2 deduction for some Untranslated stuff but no worries)


I really Enjoyed reading this.

See you on the next Update. ^^

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Thank you for the great feedback. Regarding the delete saves button, yes, most games just ignore that, and for those who play both on PC and mobile, deleting saves normally is a nightmare. That's why I included it in my game. The untranslated things like the eviction message were indeed my mistake, and I plan to fix them in the next updates. As for some translation errors, unfortunately, even though I try to fix them, more and more keep popping up :/ haha. Anyway, thanks again for the great feedback, and I hope you enjoy the upcoming updates.

i love this game but no matter how often i reinstall it, the phone messages are always bugged, sometimes the pictures arw missing, sometimes certain characters are just blank and at the moment the messages of the MC are blank


It's not that bad since i can understand most things depending on what the other characters write, but it's still annoying 

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In the Android version?

yes

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Strange... I'll generate another version of the APK and post it here to see if that resolves the problem. Of course, I'll test it on my phone first.

Aight, It looks good the plot seems unique in a way, there's only a handful time travel AVNs that seems good. Might play this later.

I'll write a review soon. Wish me luck ^^

How to download from external files? I'm not familiar to it.

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Sorry about this, I wanted to host the downloads directly on itch.io, but the site has this annoying 1GB size limit. Even though I requested more space, they still haven't responded. So, I had to make a choice: either upload the files outside of the site and post them here, or leave the game without a new update on itch.io.

OK, so how do I download from the external files, how to works? 

Just choose whether you want to download the Windows, Mac, or Android version. Click to download, and you will be redirected to either Mediafire or MEGA. On either site, just click "Download" to get the game normally. If you're concerned about anything, you can use an ad blocker to block ads on the Mediafire site, or download directly from the MEGA site, which has no ads.

Do I need to download the Mega app? 

No

Im in love with this game and the story i like how straightforward and flexible it is. Keep up the good work 

Thank you, I plan to keep it that way, adding elements of fantasy here and there, just to ensure the game doesn't become totally boring.

is there any tips in find gallery pictures?

None of them. Most of the gallery photos will appear as you play, except for three. These three are in the point-and-click mode: one under the flower bed in the first map, the second at the metro door, and the third on the school wall next to the window.

This game looks interesting but i use the Itch app and it says it is hosted on a third party platform. As i understand it , that is because your past your alloted size requirement but i also heard you can upgrade or ask for them to increase it. Hopefully when you get a chance you can get that done. Ill be keeping an eye on the game and try again at a later time great job so far.

I've already requested more space, but itch.io always complicates things, asking for a lot of unnecessary information just to grant an additional 1GB of storage. This has been a major hassle for me. I've been trying to increase the storage for a while now with no success. That's why I've had to host the files outside of itch.io on Mega and Mediafire.

I gotcha, the game looks great and hopefully things get worked out in the near future. I look forward to keeping an eye on further development. 

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hey i like the game and the story you got going on but wouldn't it be helpful for you to make a discord so people could help you with spelling mistakes and stuff?

I already have Discord, I'm just not a frequent user.

I think what he meant was a Discord Server were people can join and help with the game. For example I could help with the German Translation and Programming.

I'll look into it later with more attention.

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Love the new update, also can put the translated word below the original words. (like this), please. Also keep up the good work. 

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I liked the chapters there are and the characters are charismatic I liked them

Some text language did not match the language I choosen, I choose English but one text language are not, the scene where the Mc receive the letter from his apartment. 

This letter is a PNG with text in an image. I'd have to translate this image into every language, and it would be too much work to link each image to each language. In the next update, I'll put a text box below with the translation.

This letter is a PNG with text in an image. I'd have to translate this image into every language, and it would be too much work to link each image to each language. In the next update, I'll put a text box below with the translation.

OK. 

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Hey, I have a bug or a crash problem..when we first meet the twins from getting back from the resturant with mom, my game seems to crash every single time i reload that scene..it keeps crashing, if you need to know what phone i use it is an Android 13. I love the game so far and would like to play more of it..i have also played one of your other games in the past, please fix. Thank you and have a good day. 

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Hey same here 😭 what ep you play? 

I think its ep5

There's not much else I can do. I've looked through all the code and images, and there doesn't seem to be any issue. The problem seems to be with the version of Ren'Py. I'll have to look for an older version to see if that fixes the error.

I've done a few things to reduce the lag, but in certain parts of the game on some devices, it still doesn't perform very well.

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Thank you, I wil try it again.

(Edit: Heyyy you fixed it! Great job!) 👍

That's great, and thanks for letting me know about all the lag and errors. It really helped me out.

I don't mean to take this rudely but may i know when the next ep comes out or sometime near?

Not rude at all, haha. The next episode will be released soon. I took a week off after the release of the previous EP and spent the week working on the game code to fix the lag and some bugs, but I've already started developing the next EP.

btw, in case anyone was wondering, downloading the latest episode includes all previous episodes

Does this have ntr, please that this game have no ntr.

No, there's no NTR.

Bom o meu Android é 16.0 e RAM acima de 12 então não acho que seja o meu... Que triste queria ajudar dando uma boa quantia para até fazer um jogo com melhores gráficos mas assim nem vai dar... Obs: Resposta ao comentário de My Second Chance 0.4... estou realmente triste queria jogar a história me pegou e ela é muito interessante... Queria que você pudesse me arrumar um jeito de consertar isso me mandando outro apk... Abyss_cat

Como eu disse, eu já analisei e não sei qual é o problema, o jogo não contem muitos códigos, sempre em algumas partes ele só fica assim, lento e travando, talvez seja problema com essa versão do renpy na hora de compliar.

Para a proxima versão eu vou ter que olhar todo os codigos do zero, realmente não sei qual é o problema, mais tenta jogar a versao de PC usando o joyplay, talvez resolva o seu problema.

Eu dei uma pesquisada, e em vários android o ren py tá crashando bastante, mas até usando meu notebook o seu jogo tá travando nos mesmos lugares, e no meu celular e notebook o único jogo em renpy q trava é o seu... 

Deve ser algum excesso de código, normalmente crasha em cenários que tem muitos assets como na loja de carro no começo da história, não sou programador, mas tenho certeza que o excesso de uso de memória por causa dos carros no fundo de cenário causa crash, ou por usar toda a memória ram ou por ter alguma incompatibilidade de código com o renpy (talvez um asset de código externo causando conflito).

Mesmo problema na sala de aula (mesas, cadeiras e quadro negro), no campo de flores da menina de cabelo azul (flores do fundo)...

Pq em nenhum outro jogo da esse erro, apenas no seu... E isso tá me matando, to apaixonado na história, mas não consigo ler ela... Pqp!! Kkkkk

Então Abbys, acho que o problema é um desses...

Conserta aí,me salva kkk

kkkkk mais ai que tá, renpy é tudo imagens pre renderizadas, com ctz é problema no próprio renpy, eu já tentei consertar mais sempre rola isso, para eu mexer nisso agora só no EP5, já que eu tou trabalhando em um game que vou lançar completo, um spin off igual o que eu soltei recentemente, caso queira, eu posso criar um save para você depois da parte do café e te enviar, basta dizer qual nome colocar no save.

O episódio 4 continua a mesma coisa viu .. quando ele está com a mãe no ônibus saindo do restaurante crasha do nada... O mesmo problema do anterior... O jogo foi renderizado para rodar em Android? Desde o começo fica travando mas progride mas quando chega neste restaurante já fica impossível de passar daali.

Estranho, então é só ai no seu android, nos outros ele passa de boas dessa parte, não tive reclamação até agora, já tentei verificar se era algum problema nos códigos mais não é.

My Second Chance 0.3 está travando na parte do restaurante, e não sai dali quando a mãe dele assina o contrato já começa a travar. Logo após isso não avança mais só crasha o jogo....

Vish, isso deve ser algum problema ou no apk ou na versão de PC, aqui está normal, tenta jogar a versão 0.4 que é a mesma, cada update é o mesmo jogo só que com um EP a mais.

Played a little bit of it and so far was good then the ancestor part came up and i couldn't understand a thing and i downloaded the windows version.... so yeah from what i can tell it needs to be fully translated.

I agree the game looks promising but needs a real translation as it is currently it is kinda hard to read.

Bom trabalho em fazer em português, mas o jogo está crashando muito, principalmente nas cenas que mudam de cenário, por favor conserta isso, to adorando a novela.. estou usa do no Android, valeu

Já tentei corrigir o problema, é alguma coisa que envolve os scripts do renpy, estou tentando corrigir mais está um pouco dificil.

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Sorry, it seems there's some issue with the scripts. In the next update, I'll add a language switch menu within the game.

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will there be more futanari on male scenes in the future? but many more?

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For now, only the friend of the MC that he just met will be included, but perhaps I'll bring in a few more in the future.  More just the MC having sex with the trans characters, not the other way around.

And in this game, there's no futanari, just a trans boy.

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